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WALT: Gather information and facts from the internet about The Rugby World Cup?

WALT:Find facts and information from the internet about a person

My Marks for the Piece of Writing

WALT: use a rubric to mark a piece of writing
SC:I will use the rubric to mark and then write Why I gave it that mark.
I will add the total of points together and give it a level.


 In our  Tautoro School  we have so many new students who have enrolled  in our school. Because of the new enrollments every time we have a  powhiri or assembly we  always get squashed, and we feel really uncomfortable. So the facility that is needed in Tautoro School  is  a new  hall.
Why do we need a hall?

First a  hall is needed by Tautoro School because when we have new students enrolling in our school, every new child needs  a powhiri.  There are more students enrolling  into our school every week and we are  feeling really squashed in our small library.  If we had a hall our manuhiri would  feel more comfortable and they would  be able to shake everybody's hands without pushing past students and then they would feel very welcomed, comfortable and feel more relaxed.

Secondly: if we had a community hall we would also be able to play sports inside.   If it was raining or if it became too hot.  Then we wouldn't be missing out on our fitness and fitness  makes you feel good and it exercises your brain. And this would help students to concentrate more in class.

Another reason why we need a hall is so that we could get a kitchen built in the hall then we would be able to have technology at our school instead of travelling to town to use another school's kitchen.  We would be able to  learn how to cook and bake and then we would be able to help our whanau cook and bake at home.


Last of all we need  a hall because our community would be able to use the hall in the weekend which will bring  all our local communities together for meetings or  gala days.

In conclusion, I strongly believe we need a community hall at our school because our  Tautoro school community  is growing every week with new students enrolling into our school. It is important  that we have a new hall so that we won't be squashed and then we would feel comfortable and  then  we would listen better because we would all feel relaxed. If we don't have a hall we will always feel squashed and we will not have enough room in our teeny library for new students.


Score     Reasons why you have given this mark

Ideas
5: Because they have lots of ideas that connect to the topic and each idea is supported by
Extra information.

Structure Language
5:  Because their writing is structured appropriately and is well developed.

Organisation
5: Because their ideas are organised into basic paragraphs.

Vocabulary
4: Because they used a range of words and phrases to add detail and give specific information.

Sentence Structure
5: Because they can write a variety of sentences that are grammatically correct.

Punctuation
4: Because they  always use full stops and capital letters correctly.

Spelling
5: Because they can spell the majority of Essential List words correctly .

Total
33    4P

This is my Paper Chair Engineering Challenge.

S What is the science behind this challenge? 

To create a chair that can  hold a stuffed

animal using only paper and tape

Big enough for him to sit in 

Research this topic using books or

and the internet record any information you may find.

1.we need a six inch piece of paper.  

2.The paper should be divided

into 6 pieces  

3.we need to crease it well so

that it can break easily. 

4.Follow the instruction and rules

that we have been given.

 E What was your design solution for  this challenge? 

Make 4 sturdy rolls  of paper into a tube and leave

a little square piece of paper.

Then  wrap the paper tubes tightly with tape so that they don't come undone. ...

Tape the four legs to the seat of the chair 

and then just add on. 

M  What data can you record for this
challenge?

1. Record how much
2. tape and paper we use.
3. Record how much time 
4. we took
5. Record how much weight
6. it could lift.

Student Lab Sheet: Paper Chair Challenge                    

My Questions? Did I participate in my group? Did we work together? Did we complain about our chair?

Were you successful in the challenge? Why?

Yes because we were working together without no arguing

And we were doing what we were told.

What was the most difficult part of the challenge? 

 The most difficult part  of the challenge was
Sticking the tape onto both pieces of paper so that they would
stick together.

What was the best idea you came up with during this challenge?

Sticking little paper under our tubes so that it would
stand up properly so that it  would not fall down.

Did your paper chair work? Why or Why not?  

Yes Because we had stuck our little tubes in the right
position for the chair to stand up and we had
stuck little pieces of paper under the tubes so that it will stand
up straight and hold weight.

What type of chair design did you use? Why?

We had made it a high chair so that we could see if Our chair could the
teddy bear .Because if we had a low chair  that would be cheating and
we wouldn’t know if the chair would of held the teddy bear.

What did you learn about construction and engineering during this challenge? 

I had learnt that you can rip the paper by just folding it and creasing it so
that it will break.

I also had learnt that sticking little pieces of paper under the tube
would make it stand up  properly.