Bucket filling

Explanation Writing

                                                       Being a good Friend

 What is friendship?
Friendship is something between two people and these two people are friends. So if someone is honest to you all the time the other person will do the same thing you done to them. So be good friend to as many people as you can. Then you would have lots of friends.  Also so don’t lie to them.  Be honest cause when you lie to someone that lie turns real and when they find out the right thing they would start getting angry or maybe sad because you were being mean to them or maybe ignoring them. So be a good friend.

If the person is from another culture respect them so then they would also respect you. So make friends and they would learn the the things that you do because they are from another culture and then they would get used to the other person culture and they would be your friend forever. Be friendly.

What does Being a good friend mean?
Friendship means supporting someone in a game or maybe if they lose make them happy and support them. If the winner is being mean to the loser, cheer them up and say they did a good job  means they are a your friend because they appreciate you for what they have done to you then they would be a nice friend. So care for your friend.

In conclusion you should be a good friend to someone because they would be your friend they would see you everyday and every morning if they are your neighbour  or someone else you met in public,or maybe at the park. But If you don’t follow these things I’ve told you Then you would maybe be lonely and you won’t have any friends.so you should be a good friend to someone then you would be happy.

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explanation writing - Kindness

Kindness

Kindness is the quality of being friendly,generous,considerate and also it is a kind act. Kindness is something that brings friendship together and also it brings teamwork and it makes people happy so be a kind person.

Secondly  Kindness works by being a good friend and sharing with each other and it can also mean you can be very nice to them because that would make them so happy and very joyful kindness means you gotta treat your friend how they want to be treated so you can respect them and then they would treat you how you treated them and you can talk .

In conclusion Kindness is something that would help you be nice to someone and it would also help you make friends and it would  catch the person’s attention by saying a kind thing to them because they are being nice to you so be Kind to them then you would get the kindness feeling.

Kawa of Care

WALT: Create a DLO that inspires learners to follow our kawa of care.
I know I will be successful because my audience will learn what I am trying to teach them.

Healthy eating

Healthy Eating

WALT to use the correct structure for Persuasive Writing.

30.03.17

Healthy eating         

I think we should eat healthy food.

Firstly I think we should eat healthy food because

it gives you energy to run faster and it grows your brain

smarter.

Secondly I think we should eat healthy food because

you will have healthy skin and eyes.

Another reason I think we should eat healthy food

is because it can make your brain grow healthy.

Lastly I think we should eat healthy food because

the healthy stuff in the food helps our body to fight infections.

      

 So I think we should eat healthy food.

Report Writing

White Tailed Spiders

A white-tailed spider is a spider that came from Australia. It gets its name from the the little patch at the end of its body.

The White Tailed spider has a long dark grey body with a white patch at the end of its abdomen.

There are special tufts at the end of the legs so that the spider can stick onto smooth or sloping surfaces.

It also has two palps at the front of its body that it uses for grooming and tasting.

They live under bark and plants and they can be living

In houses or they could be in shoes that are left on the floor.

The white tailed spider has been known to bite people. They leave a red mark and it could cause swelling.

Here are my learning goals for Term 1 2017

Recount Writing

Persuasive Writing. Rules at School

I am learning to add more details in my reasons to persuade my readers.                     14.03.17

                 Rules at School

           I think we should have rules at School

 

       Firstly I think we should have rules at School

       because we will be safe and we will not

       get hurt.

      Secondly I think we should have rules at School

       because when we follow the rules there will be nothing broken at School because everyone will be looking after equipment.

 

     Another reason I think we should have rules at school

     is because our School will be happy when everyone looks after each other.

     Lastly I think we should have rules at school

     because there will be no one getting bullied because there will be people looking after each other.

  

        So I think we should have rules at school

Persuasive writing. We should brush our teeth every day.