Hi Angel Rose I really enjoyed reading your story about going to your aunt's house and I also liked how you asked to go back to your aunt's house but the only thing i would have to say is make your story smaller so you can read the whole story but other than that it was a good story but my favorite bit was when your cousin waved to you under the water so good work keep it up. By Ruby
Hi Angel Rose
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your story about going to your aunt's house and I also liked how you asked to go back to your aunt's house but the only thing i would have to say is make your story smaller so you can read the whole story but other than that it was a good story but my favorite bit was when your cousin waved to you under the water so good work keep it up.
By Ruby