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Wednesday, 27 July 2016

Here is my recount about one moment from my holiday.

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  1. Hi Angel Rose
    I really enjoyed reading your story about going to your aunt's house and I also liked how you asked to go back to your aunt's house but the only thing i would have to say is make your story smaller so you can read the whole story but other than that it was a good story but my favorite bit was when your cousin waved to you under the water so good work keep it up.
    By Ruby

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